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The Chosen: Chapter One, Part 1
The Chosen: Chapter One, Part 1

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A scream of agony came from Snoink, now she would never know how her story was.

The usual. I continued around.
"Oh waiter, would you get me some freshly picked roses?" TBR asked me.
"Uh, I don't think I can-" I started to say, making reference to the lack of roses, but suddenly there were roses in my hand! A note came with it:
FROM THE FANTASY FORUM, FOR TBR.
I grimaced, they had spelled it in all caps.

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I got down from the cielling, and watched Griffen use his moderater tools to fix the message, before handing it to TBR.

She looked at it, then a really big grin lit up her face.

Somehow, I thaught she might know who it was from...

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Meanwhile i'm decide to explore, an see a button saying virtaul Dreams, i press it. All of sudden i'm in England at the time of knights.

"I could begin to like this ship", then it all blurs out an goes back to YWS1.

An theirs stands Sam looking really evil.

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I look at Mesh.

"Meshy, m'dear, I'm bored."

She shakes her head at me and writes on a piece of paper, "You talk too much. You'll use up oxygen."

I shrug and walk into the Mods lounge. Free oxygen for all! I smile and count my points, savoring them. After all, you can't run a good ship without having mods, and you can't have mods without oxygen. I head out toward the battle arena and stop in my tracks.

FLAMES! These nasty comments are fed with copious amounts of oxygen, so I rush up to them. "Stop it at once! You must not burn without paying the points!"

Unfortunately, my command over such things is a bit... weak. So the flames continue burning, taking up precious oxygen without paying.

"Oh Naaaaaaa-aaaaaaaaaaaaaate!"

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I'm bored now.

"Crysi, I'm bored." I say, finally having located her. But she's not listening because there are some rather impolite flames sucking away all of her oxygen.

I glare fiercely at the fire. "Stop stealing people's oxygen!" I command. It doesn't listen and sucks away 10,000 of my points.

...I need to find some chocolate.

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I watched the flames for a minute. "Suckers," I muttered.

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I walked up to Mesh and stood beside her, admiring the flames.

"Indeed," I agreed, nodding in approval.

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"Sorry, I can't help starting fires, y'know," I say, watching the crowd slowly gather.

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Griffin runs to the area and splashes Firestarter with water.

At least, he hopes it is water. It was in the bathroom.

Wait a minute, since when did YWS-1 have a bathroom?

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Since mankind had the need to pee privately! Of course, that was where I was about to go, before Griffin skipped the long line of people and ran out the room with only god knows what in his bucket.

"You skipped the toilet queue!" Screamed Teo, who had his legs crossed.

Laughing, I forgot the urge to go to the toilet and went to see where Griffin was going to put that bucket. I came into the room, seeing Firestarter soaking in a substance that smelt funny. I chuckled and went back to the toilet queue to see if Teo had wet himself yet.
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"YOU!!!!" I scream, pointing at Jack. "I shoulda known... Of course it'd be the Brit." I mumble a bit more about assistant admins and Europeans, then realize there are more people from Britain than from California and I should probably shut up. Even Mesh starts glaring at me, but we all know she's madly in love with Jack and wants to live in England with him.

I sigh. "I guess fires ARE kinda pretty... But just make sure to pay a few points everytime you start one, okay Jack?" I continue staring at the flames, entranced.

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Somehow I'd ended up alone. I found the room where a bunch of mods and admins and regular members were gathered, standing around a fire that Jack had started.

"Marshmallow, anyone?"

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I take the roses after much deliberation and I read the note. Smliling I look up and see a dark figure lurking around the dining hall. I knit my brows and then suddenly there was a thunderous shake of the hall and everybody screamed.

Areida messed up her dress and Sam toppled over, rolling around. Griffinkeeper, who I forgot to tip, was sucked backwards and slammed against the wall.

"Calling all passangers! Calling all passangers! There has been a breach of our Unbreachable system. Somebody has vandilised the outer layer of the ship, thus letting space air into the haul. For safety precaustions, I am turing off the oxygen to preserve it!" *GASPS* "Guards, search!"
And then the speaker went off and everybody fell to their knees.

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I bumped into a member. "Oh... hi...!"

What was her name again?

"...Haze!"

She blinked. "It's Emma now."

What the...?

Suddenly Fontroy ran into me.

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