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Postby mimimac on Sun Feb 07, 2010 8:50 pm

Heard 'Pain' By three days grace and I just wrote the first part down and took this picture :)

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Re: (Attempted) Photography.

Postby *writewatiwant* on Sun Feb 07, 2010 9:02 pm

Mimi! *tackles* Awww, are ya back?

By the way, I really liked this photo! The angle impresses me and it has a classical feeling to it. *clicks like button*

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Re: (Attempted) Photography.

Postby Explosive_Pen on Sun Feb 07, 2010 9:08 pm

Mimi!
I like this. Your handwriting is beautiful and I like this song anyway. ^^
I agree with Kat; your angle is great. I like how it focuses in on the last bit of the quote (my favorite part anyway). However, I think there's too much empty space down at the bottom, but that can easily be cropped out.
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Re: (Attempted) Photography.

Postby bElL3 on Mon Feb 08, 2010 2:33 am

wow I think it"s beautiful! I wish I had a camera and the skills to take pictures like that but I don't... the only problem that i had was the fact that the attachment was slightly enormous and i couldn't see the whole thing i had to keep scrolling everywhere to get a really good view but doubt that's you're fault :wink: by the way, you're taste in music is awesome i love three days grace 8) 8)
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Re: (Attempted) Photography.

Postby Lava on Mon Feb 08, 2010 4:14 am

Hi Mimi!

OMG! This is so similar to what I'd done with the same song. No kidding. I swear, if I find the pic, I'll show it to you. *Likes*
I'd written it using liquid eyeliner on my hand and made the font all goth-ish. Anyway, 'nuff of that and onto this photo:

1.Awesome angle. Good lighting too. :)
2.You could maybe crop a bit of the bottom where its blurs a little too much. It would give a better effect.
3.It is slightly over-exposed at the top part of the picture. Try to edit it, if you can.
4. This is the major thing that's been bugging me : the background. If it had been all black it would've been fine; but that orange-ish patch is terribly distracting. I'm really forcing my eyes to look down.

Anyway, awesome work. I love the lines, handwriting and the photo.
Good Job! :)
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Re: (Attempted) Photography.

Postby AspiringAuthorA..M. on Mon Feb 08, 2010 4:32 am

Hello eye am AspinringAuthorA..M. Please excuse my insanity. :lol:

Now, about your picture. It is quite nice. I like how the writing contrasts from light to dark every other line. Did you achieve it through lighting, or did you write down the lyrics in different colors?

Those are rhetorical questions by the way.

I have nothing against your photo except that it is much too large.

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Re: (Attempted) Photography.

Postby mimimac on Mon Feb 08, 2010 4:39 pm

I really wish I could make it a smaller size but to be perfectly honest... I have absolutely no idea how :S *face/palm*
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Re: (Attempted) Photography.

Postby AliceRose on Thu Feb 11, 2010 5:01 pm

OMG!!! I loooooove this!

I'm a photographer myself, but I've never been able to get that perfect angle to do what you did. I want a copy lol

This isn't "attempted" photography. This is GREAT photography!!
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Re: (Attempted) Photography.

Postby kimithy on Fri Feb 12, 2010 12:19 am

I LOVE IT

the angle is perfect the light is perfect!!!!
you have realt talent
keep snapping
good job :elephant: :elephant: :elephant:
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Re: (Attempted) Photography.

Postby BenFranks on Fri Feb 12, 2010 5:12 pm

Hey there Mimi.

A lot of people are experimenting like this lately and it's clear that your's stands out from the rest. The light and angle is perfect. I think your handwriting is beautiful as well. Perhaps one suggestion would be to go one step further in being experimental and pack some originality in it. The talent for photography you have is excellent so keep it up.

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Re: (Attempted) Photography.

Postby AyumiGosu17 on Fri Feb 19, 2010 6:09 pm

You call this "attempted" photography??? It's awesome! I like it a lot!

It gives us a bit of an edge as to what the song is about. Yes, I've heard "Pain", and I absolutely adore 3DG, but for those who haven't...well... Let's just say that this really delves into the inner meanings of the song and show us a bit of what may be going through the photographer's head at that particular moment in time.

Fabulous perspective, and I love the writing style and lighting. :wink: Thumbs up!
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Re: (Attempted) Photography.

Postby StoryWeaver13 on Tue Mar 30, 2010 3:49 am

Hi, I critized the last one of yours a little but I have no complaints about this one. The only thing "attempted" about this is the fact that the sizing's kinda off. This is really great; the lighting and color is awesome. The colors are really rich and the angle's great. Nice handwriting also. :wink:
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Re: (Attempted) Photography.

Postby Skins on Tue Mar 30, 2010 11:13 am

Hey there :)

I agree with what others have said. This is pretty darn great! I love it! The contrast of the picture is really, really good. Well done.

I also have to agree with everyone else though on the size. You can't really see the whole photo because it's so big. I would love to see the entire picture. All you need to do is resize it. There's a thread on how to resize photos in this forum, in case you're not sure how to do it.

Overall, I loved this! All you need to do is make it slightly smaller :wink:

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