Hi Mimi!
OMG! This is so similar to what I'd done with the same song. No kidding. I swear, if I find the pic, I'll show it to you. *Likes*
I'd written it using liquid eyeliner on my hand and made the font all goth-ish. Anyway, 'nuff of that and onto this photo:
1.Awesome angle. Good lighting too.

2.You could maybe crop a bit of the bottom where its blurs a little too much. It would give a better effect.
3.It is slightly over-exposed at the top part of the picture. Try to edit it, if you can.
4. This is the major thing that's been bugging me : the background. If it had been all black it would've been fine; but that orange-ish patch is terribly distracting. I'm really forcing my eyes to look down.
Anyway, awesome work. I love the lines, handwriting and the photo.
Good Job!

Cheers,
~Lava