Hello, this poem is called Find me aka poetry take two. I think it's an improvement (and much tidier) than my last poem, no?
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*Note: Random photo, it's not mine!
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What do you mean when you say that I
have lost my faith?
You with the family, smiling, at your sickly sweet
joyous life—and I am envious.
I am sweating. I am crawling into the dark shadows of my wardrobe
reaching out, my arms are trembling, blue blooded veins pronounced.
Then I finally retreat into my miserable mind and hum myself
into the blissful memories of my past.
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You with wine dribbling down your thick chin,
patting your paunch, drinking your gin
the image sends me shivers,
and I am shaking. I am shaking against the screaming winds of the night,
whilst I walk for miles down the lonely road,
into the country and yonder the frozen fields.
Then I collapse into the nettle bushes of the road side,
and with one final sweep of the black horizon, I begin to hum.
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So tell me please, what you mean when you say
that I
have lost my faith?
I have endured the blistering winds of the night,
I have, crept into my closed closets and uncovered
the deadly skeletons who guard the key to my past.
And yet, there is no sign of Him.
Do not look down on me.
Just tell me,
please, is it I who searches for Him?
Or is He who will find me?
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Thank you for reading.
I have an idea in my head to write my next poem about Corpus Christi. However, I am stuck on what aspect of Corpus Christi I'm going to write about. Any suggestions? Please PM me! I would be grateful for anything that turns up in my inbox.
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