| Young Writers Society - Community Forums For Young Writers |
|
This thread was created on October 5, 2005
  |
|
Memory
Topic ID: 5032
|
View previous topic :: View next topic |
| Author |
Message |
Harley
awkward and innocent.
Speaker of the Forum
Gender: 
Age: 16
Joined: 27 Jan 2005
Posts: 518
Reviews: 241
Country: scotland.
300 Points
|
 Posted: Wed Oct 05, 2005 7:48 pm Post subject: Memory |
 |
|
I had the tune from that Andrew Lloyd Webber song "Memory" in my head, and I started making up these new lyrics to the tune of the chorus. I liked them so I thought I'd post 'em and see if anyone else does.
Summer
It has ended so quickly
We're alone in the moonlight
Our hearts beating as one
You look at me, your eyes piercing deep into my soul
With the memory
Of the sun
Touch me
Promise you'll never leave me
Think of me when you feel lost
And when spirits are down
And the memory will stay alive in each of our hearts
There to soften
Every frown
Memory
For what seems like a lifetime
One that lasts for three seasons
Until summer returns
We'll remember the precious times when nothing was new
And together
We'll be one |
_________________
inspiration. imagination. creativity. |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
Chevy
science, again.
Master of the Forum
Gender:
Age: 18
Joined: 21 Nov 2004
Posts: 1613
Reviews: 660
Country: It's Complicated.
300 Points
|
| Posted: Wed Oct 12, 2005 2:13 pm Post subject: |
|
|
| I loved everything except for "Touch Me"...seems like something else should go there. As for everything else...it was great. I've never heard Andrew Lloyd Webber's Memory...instead, I was singing it along to the Beatles' Yesterday. |
_________________
"I could not escape a feeling that this was my own funeral, and you do not cry in that case."
- A Seperate Peace (John Knowles) |
|
| Back to top |
|
Harley
awkward and innocent.
Speaker of the Forum
Gender:
Age: 16
Joined: 27 Jan 2005
Posts: 518
Reviews: 241
Country: scotland.
300 Points
|
| Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 6:04 pm Post subject: |
|
|
I'm surprised you haven't heard it; you might have and not known it, though. "Touch Me" is a line in the song, that's why it's in there. I don't like it much either: it sounds a bit wrong in this day and age  |
_________________
inspiration. imagination. creativity. |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum
You can attach files in this forum
You can download files in this forum
|
|
| This thread was created on October 5, 2005 |
Graphics By Bobo | YWS Sword & Shield Logo by Bobo
Bartemius says, Blessed is the man who, having nothing to say, abstains from giving us wordy evidence of the fact. - George Eliot
|
