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Grrr...this is hard! I usually practice writing really good opening lines not bad ones! 
Here it goes...
I never used to like fishing, but then I caught a really big fish.
Wow that was really random... |
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"Christine get down here! your going to be late!"
Liza was gorgeous, not just your average beauty. I mean world stopping gorgeous. So perfect that some one could go bline staring at her absolout perfectness.
I flopped down on the living room couch, turning on Disney channel.
*thats all I can think of now. But there are tons of begenings that make me want to scream. |
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| Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2008 1:05 am Post subject: |
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Briiiiiing! The telephone rang making Leslie jump.
Grrrrr! I HATE when things start like this! |
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| Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2008 1:21 am Post subject: |
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He was perfect. Stunningly handsome and sensitive with beautiful blue eyes.
ew, that one just makes me want to puke. |
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| Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2008 11:20 am Post subject: |
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"Oh my God that plane is flying straight towards us" Said Craven
...Ummm any worse?? (Well i cant say any good so i guess this will have to do)  |
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| Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2008 11:39 am Post subject: |
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“My name is Anaytharakhaiayain Smith, and I am The Chosen One.”
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“My name is Anaytharakhaiayain Smith, and I am The Chosen One, and so I will do great and great things, but I don’t know if I will be able to - well, I don’t know why exactly, as I’m charming, willing to sacrifice everything for my friends (and they for me, and yes, I have tons of friends, all the right people - there’s this warrior and this wizard and - and, well, I don’t remember, but they don’t really matter - I do), and - ah, and I’m prophesied, so nothing can really go awry, and I know that someone will tell me how to foil the Bad Guy’s plan’s in the last minute - no, I mean, I’ll figure that out myself, as I’m highly intelligent, also; but, I know that humbleness is a virtue, so I’m not boasting or anything.” |
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| Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2008 11:45 am Post subject: |
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"You are insane!" I said then got killed by a flying harpoon.
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| Posted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 5:09 pm Post subject: |
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Worst opening line ever:
"Hi, my name's Bob, and this is a story about me!" |
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just stole your pickle! Wha hahaha *runs off*
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| Posted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 5:17 pm Post subject: |
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| "Poop." the baby said. |
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| Posted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 9:33 pm Post subject: |
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'Ohhhh yes! Harder! Harder!' she screamed while I beat her with a stick.
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| Posted: Thu Oct 02, 2008 3:24 pm Post subject: |
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"My god we're dead!" He said |
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| Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 4:09 pm Post subject: |
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"That was the moment I realized nothing could be like before."
We should elect the best (worst) lines or something  |
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| Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 4:21 pm Post subject: |
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| In the final moments before death, I racked my brains for something that could save me. There was nothing. |
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| Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 4:53 pm Post subject: |
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| "The end" |
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| Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2008 4:19 pm Post subject: |
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| Nothing really interesting happened during the time this novel was set... |
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