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Silent Tonight Under this Man Carved Stone

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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 3:09 pm Post subject: Silent Tonight Under this Man Carved Stone

Note: You may recognize that some of the lines from my poetry will be found in this song. Verse One the answer to questions will find itself around so uncup your hands when mysteries rain down don't stop the tears it won't always mean you're weak look pass this stone there's more than what you see Chorus it's silent tonight under this man carved stone it's silent tonight and we're growing old but the race you ran has learned to cease and until next time rest in peace Verse Two I watched you crumble into a thousand memories your last laugh was a thousand symphonies and as the stars turn in the cobalt sky you ended that night with silent alibis
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Posted: Sun Oct 02, 2005 8:42 pm Post subject:

I liked it as a poem, and I can hear an even better song behind it. Really liked it. I liked the chorus more than the verses.

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