Okay; I have no idea what this is. I usually write rambles set in the 1800's and I never write this sort of stuff. I have no idea of the plot or what is going to happen. This came to me, actually, it's the first piece of writing that has naturally flown through me in a long time. I'm not sure if I'm going to pursue it, but I just want opinions. I've found out one thing about myself, and that is....not to plan. I cannot plan. I have been in a huge depression for ages because of stupid planning. So..rip it to pieces and tell me of how terrible it is. Ta I remain forever yours <couldn't help myself This is very different from my usual stuff, I am stuck in olden day worlds that have long been forgotten by most people. One thing I know, John, whoever he is, isn't mad. The voices are those that we have, the voices of our characters, creations etc.
Her mother told her to search for the silvers and the coins and the notes. Coppers, she said, were useless.
John; who are you John? Who? Let the words resound in your ears. Feel them echo around the room. See, see that line up there? The line spiralling up the back of the wall? Cracking and splitting? Do you see it, John?
Words weren’t like people. Her mother’d told her that a long time ago. Words, she said, were different. Words were what she wanted them to be. Words were there for her.
It was October he started hearing the voices. Or maybe, maybe it was November. He couldn’t quite remember. But it was dark, he recalled. The darkness enveloped him. He liked to think of it as a flame. The darkness, that is. The eternal flame of darkness would lick him to sleep.
He liked that. He liked to sit in shadows and merge into other people. He liked the dark, that at least, he knew. In the dark his soul would seep through his skin and bask in the moonlight.
He didn’t care for reality, of that he was sure. He took to dreaming, and wishing upon non existent dandelions.
He cared not for the nice days, for the sun and the blue sky were not his calling, he should feel rather more himself on the dreary days, fragments of the partially eclipsed moonlight visible between brick houses. On the nice days, the world was perfect and he didn’t want anything more. It was the dreary days, the dark and the damp that inspired him. The voices were clearer in the dark, he could hear them better.
The voices liked questions. They were all questions and no answers.
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