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by dannyr122 in Fantasy Fiction
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Hell Is Other People

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 06, 2008 11:27 pm    Post subject: Hell Is Other People Reply with quote

How the cards fall

depends on where the players stand

knee deep in ear drippings

of liquid cortex fascination

premature ego vaccination

cut the chord, count the dead

tell me now what does this

death rattle spray 

remind you of?

Hope and decay?

or the same recycled carbon

biological biography of

steaming entrails entice

our shying mesmerized captivation

in eyes that minds regret to confess

eons of silly human prejudice

while the Gods finger paint

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 08, 2008 7:06 pm    Post subject: HOW I FELT ABOUT THE POEM. Reply with quote

I really like the poem. I don't know how to explain it, but I can tell you it was beautiful. Not in the happy fake poem kind of way.
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 12:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Why, thank you. Just for that, and because I'm an arbitrary buffoon, have all of my points. Surprised

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