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You know, I wish I could draw like that. Lol. I can draw, but I have to erase things so many times to get the proportions right... ><
The only thing I can see is her neck doesn't look quite right-is it further in on one side?
Love the eyes. The hair is good too- but shouldn't you see it going right to the neck- you know, where you see the hair hanging from the back of your head? If you get what I mean.
The hairclip and flower are a nice touch, but where's your trademark stars? 
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| Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2008 11:16 am Post subject: :P |
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lol, he teacher made me rub them out 
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| Make the hairclip one decorated with a star
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| Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2008 11:29 am Post subject: |
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Wow. Just Wow. You seem to be a great poet and a professional drawer. Even I can't draw like that. If you come to our school, our art teacher would have made you her pet student. Your drawing is marvelous.
Okay, in the picture you had used deep brush work and dark outlines to draw the eyes. The eyes are the best part of a face. Ever seen a picture of a face, and can you guess how he/she looks like without seeing their eyes? No. The eyes should have it's emotions shown to understand the whole picture.
Well, I can say that this was a great picture and most beautifully drawn. Well done.
And good luck.
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If I didnt have such high standards I would say it's very good but I have always had extremely high standards with everything involving art! The eyes have no emotion at all...the eylashes...theres something wrong there... and her face is expressionless.
Your very talented... I know because anyone but me would say this is fantastic.
Your very good at drawing hair and flowers but need to work more on facial fetures and shading can add a lot of depth and emotion and make the picture pop.... this looks unfinished but you can improve it and post it again because if you can do hair that well I'm sure you can do the rest to!
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| Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 5:11 pm Post subject: :P |
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| Thanks, as i said im not so good with faces but i did this for my art homework like a year ago and it was just about proportions so if you look at my other stuff im sure you might find something you like more
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