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Darkness is soft..
Darkness is soft..

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 5:03 pm    Post subject: Evil of the world Reply with quote

The dark is coming,

In my eyes,

you better look out guys,

it is in your lies.

Dark is rising,

in the wind,

with the sins,

oh my.

I wanna go away,

far away,

away from this place,

to a place where darkness's never been to.

The dead are rising,

from their graves,

what will you do?

when they come for you.

Our times is,

the one,

corrupt,

and done.

We were,

too late,

to understand,

our faith,


I wanna go away,

far away,

away from this place,

run away,

away,

a-wa-a-ay.

Our world is run by,

politics,

companies,

therefor liars can you see?

I wanna go away,

far away,

away from this place,

could God come and end it today?

See the kids,

sad in their minds,

longing for their lives.

Where is the hero,

we're waiting for,

to take the evil away,

or is there a hero at all?


I wanna go away,

far away,

away from this place,

life is a waist,

that's what they say.

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 5:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i don't really know if this is rap or not- but if you would rap this for like a heavy metal beat i should say- then it would be really good-----my opinion-------
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 8:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I agree with my friend Vlad. You could actually make this rap for a heavy beat.
Your song is really teachible and rite, but I know that politics and companies lie but I have to agree they still keep us alive.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 06, 2008 4:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Politics maybe... companies... No

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 06, 2008 3:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

How about food companies that make healthy food?
In Finland you guys have KC super market.
In America we have Kroger,Publix,Whole Foods, and a lot more

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