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What do I do with you?

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lordgluzman
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Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 8:14 pm Post subject: What do I do with you?

It has been a huge number of years You though through this, that I had no ears -You cried! -you lied -wolf too many times I need to hue between forgiving or leaving you -what! Do! I do with you? I need to hue between forgiving or leaving you It is a hard decision to make After the friendship we had Problem that it is going to end all bad This dissection is really hard to make I try to listen to my heart This is not easy like a piece of cake You have tied me to many knots As you do this our friendship rots and rots What! Do! I do with you? I need to hue between forgiving or leaving you It is a hard decision to make You are like a fly That thinks that when you are about to die I will come and save you When ever you will get stuck in a web A vicious spider comes near “Ow, my god it’s a rider passing me by. Can you help me? Can you save me?” you ask But this time I pass Now I have made my decision What! Do! I do with you? I need to hue between forgiving or leaving you It is a hard decision to make

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Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 3:40 am Post subject:

first comment- GOOD

lordgluzman
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Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 2:07 pm Post subject:

I remember. You helped me to write this poem. Thank you dude I even like it a little bit more.
_________________ Blood is red But Heaven is blue The Devil will fined out And take you

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