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This doodle gives off an aura of insecurity and boredom, to me. Ha. Well, that's what school does to you.
That's what so much art can do -it has its own language.
Anyways, -what's that in her hand?
And the sea -well, let's say that I can;t really critcize, because seas/oceans are hard to draw/sketch.
Anyways, [again] good job. I like your idea of the hoodie, and the way the hair flows really connects with the whole sea idea.
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This was good.
Maybe it was becuase of the hoodie, but It looked to me like her head was slightly too big. The proportioning was good with the neck and head, but she started to get smaller as your eye traveled down. Her feet were rather small.
Other than that, I think it was good, especially for just drawing it when you were bored. 
I'd love to see more of your artwork!
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| Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 1:28 pm Post subject: |
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| A hoodie does that. But anyways. Ballons are on her hand. I think I am going to writer a story based on the picture.
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| Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 11:32 pm Post subject: |
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| Kaylyn wrote: |
| A hoodie does that. But anyways. Ballons are on her hand. I think I am going to writer a story based on the picture. |
You should make a story out of this. I can see it already.
To prevent from sounding like a broken record, I'm not going to go into those little nitpicks. But, this is a very cute cute pic. I love how it says 'bored'. Like she's dying for something good to happen to her.
If you post that story, can you PM me saying that so I can look at it?
Please!
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| Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 12:55 am Post subject: |
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| I like the water around her. Oh yea, color would've made it better! I also like that it was unplanned on line paper. It reminds me of how I am in class. well, the girlie looks depressed to me. But if she's holding balloons...she's happy huh? Oh i wanna read your story too!!!
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| Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 12:47 am Post subject: |
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| I'll start working on it!!! And I'll let you all know when its completed!
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| Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 6:49 pm Post subject: |
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| hey! it's a great pic just as everyone said, and really should write a story and go a little bit more in depth this time. although, were you depressed? or were you seriously just doodling? anyway keep drawing!
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