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It's so cute!
Though I'd let you freind know that the boys arm that you can see of looks kinda stubby... I wouldn't know how to fix it though. 
But it's soo cute!! 
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| Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 12:40 pm Post subject: |
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I agree with Myfriendsavamp about the boys arm.
This is a very sweet drawing, and I really like it in pencil, for some reason.
Did you not have this as your avatar a few days ago?
I love how their hair is sort of cut in the same way. It's cute.
Tell your friend that this is a very good drawing, and the rain is really good!
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| Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 4:23 pm Post subject: |
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Aw. *goes gooey-eyed*
The way they've been drawn short makes me thinks they've in chibi style. Obviously, I can't tell becuase I cannot see their faces!
Your friend is good, but he could work on anatomy a liitle; I second what the other to have said about the arm, and another thing I noticed is the shoulder being a little odd in proportion to where the arm begins.
But apart from that, I loves it.
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| Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 12:58 am Post subject: |
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i love it! It's sweet, this inspires me to post my drawings! thank you...  i like the rain and hair. what's makes this sweeter is how the gurlie is on her tippie toes to kiss him. Are they kissing too passionately though? Oh and this also reminds me of that other gurlie in the "bored in class" drawing. Could it possibly be her?
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| Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 2:03 am Post subject: |
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Hey!
First of all...
It's SO DANG CUTE!!!!! I'm like "awwww..."
Tell your friend that he's a "freakin cool" artist!!! I really really liked this picture
It reminds me of those "special moments" They really should last longer though.
Is it just me or should a "kiss" last longer?! I say "YES" it so should...the feeling
(I'm not talking about "making out" cause that would make a kiss last longer, but it's not the same as that "special kiss")
Cheers!!
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| Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 9:45 am Post subject: . |
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AW! its so sweet! they look so in love lol
The boys are is slightly odd but i like it anyway, makes it even sweeter
It doesnt really look like its raining though... i can see a few raindrop but not a massive rainstorm
great work! 
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| Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 10:07 am Post subject: |
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I know nothing about art, but I really liked this drawing.
It's a bit small though, can you make it bigger?
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| Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 12:43 pm Post subject: |
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| I don't think I can. The attachment can only be so large. Thanks for the critique. I'll let him know whats been said!
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| Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 7:27 pm Post subject: |
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Cute.
That dude has Chibi arms.... in a half chibi picture...
I wish I was him.... LOL
Cool pic
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| Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 7:56 pm Post subject: |
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| aww
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| Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 11:51 pm Post subject: |
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| Wow. This is SO cute! I wish I could draw. I think you did a great job! Kind of wish I could see the rain a bit more clearly though. That's the only critique I can come up with! Great job! Keep drawing and posting!
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