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Void of Beauty
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Galerius
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 Posted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 5:52 pm Post subject: Void of Beauty |
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wombat
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| Posted: Thu Oct 02, 2008 4:20 pm Post subject: |
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Wow. The language made me shiver, no-one in my school seems to own a dictionary so it seems so new to me =). I really liked this even though I only half-understood it, but I'm a bit of an idiot so it's to be expected lol. The whole thing was WAY better than anything I could ever write and I enjoyed it.
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StolenHearts.
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| Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 3:27 am Post subject: |
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Amazing simple stunning,
I really liked the words you used they definitely make people think and want to read more.
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Far better that love by the lone, doomed tree
Was torn from the rose, flung back from beauty. |
One of my favorite parts, simply well done
Sorry I can't give a better review then this my annoying brother is getting on.
So have a nice day, I look forward to reading more of your work
With all due respect,
Mackenzie |
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