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lordgluzman
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Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2008 10:58 pm Post subject: Somwhere Around Nothing

So many pity lives Being shot and stabbed by knifes Shouts and screams in the battle lines But I mostly hear the explosions of mines Sad to hear that lots of prayers die Even though we pray to the heavens up high But it doesn’t matter to me because I will see you Don’t you quit on me baby Cause I will return Sometimes I feel that my soul is lost Somewhere around nothing Men grab your guns its time to go Sometimes my heart hangs low Even though I know If I will lie My soul will to the heavens up high Sad to hear that lots of prayers die Even though we pray to the heavens up high But it doesn’t matter to me because I will see you Don’t you quit on me baby Cause I will return Sometimes I feel that my soul is lost Somewhere around nothing I will see you I swear I will fined you Why are we born to die? Fly to heaven higher and high God!!!!!!!!!!! Damn I can’t figure the question I am full of frustration Why we have to go Don’t you quit on me baby Cause I will return Sometimes I feel that my soul is lost Somewhere around nothing Don’t you quit on me baby Cause I will return Sometimes I feel that my soul is lost Somewhere around nothing I will come to you Sometimes I feel that my soul is lost Sometimes I feel that my soul is lost Somewhere around nothing

Lord Anzius
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Posted: Thu Oct 02, 2008 4:34 pm Post subject:

Robert..... Shocked

I didn't know you knew how to write songs Shocked

Dude that song rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

I could find some grammar mistakes.. so check the spellings.

Also this part was a bit weird

Quote:

Men grab your guns its time to go
Sometimes my heart hangs low
Even though I know
If I will lie
My soul will GO to the heavens up high
Sad to hear that lots of prayers die
Even though we pray to the heavens up high
But it doesn’t matter to me because I will see you

I added the boldly written part

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LORD ANZIUS WUZ HERE

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