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Which One could be you

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 30, 2008 7:15 pm    Post subject: Which One could be you Reply with quote 
to live to die

to die to live

to grieve to change

to change to give

to give to get

to get to give

to grow to fail

to fail to grow

to never know or never show

which one could be you?
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 30, 2008 8:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
oo i really like this.
very nice. short, sweet, to the point and well structured.
well done
the only bit i was a little unsure of was...
'to grow to fail

to fail to grow'
i don think it was as well adpated to the rhytthm. just a thought though
anywho, nice piece.
well done.
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 8:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
it's interesting. i haven't read too many poems set up like this one.
the flow is good and the message is clear.
keep up the good work
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