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 Posted: Sat Sep 27, 2008 10:50 am Post subject: Long Haired Girl |
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I drew this for school, but im not sure if the teacher liked it! i just did it in pencil but i added some colour on Paint program on the computer so she didnt look so boring. Hope you like!
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I hope your teacher liked it!!! I love her hair-do! 
I like the expression of her face. It actually looks like she's looking at someone or something and not just staring into space. The only critique I have is that her right eye is a little rounder than her left, but...
I would suggest putting a little colour in her hair. For some reason, I'm picturing her with golden locks. You can do whatever you want, though.
I'm glad you put some color in the backround, because she really stands out.
Keep drawing!
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| Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2008 9:24 pm Post subject: |
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I liked this drawing. If I was your teacher I would've given you an A
good luck with future drawings!
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| Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 10:11 am Post subject: :P |
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| Thankyou! wow i love nice reviews!
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| Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 12:48 pm Post subject: |
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| I think you should work on the eyes a little. I think that they are a little to round. But I love the way you drew the hair like that. I can't do it very well. You're very talented and seemed to get everything else right. You did a great job overall.
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| Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 1:10 pm Post subject: |
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| yes, I agree the eyes need some work. They look a little too round and large. But the hair is amazing. I love hhow you did the large curls and every thing. It looked really nice!
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Ok! so....
Great hair!!! -loved the texture, and the swirls it has. The lips, and nose are pretty good... the only thing that I don't like, are the eyes. They are too round and the pupil has no shadow, they are too basic for my taste. Here I add a web page that maybe will help you be better in the shadowing of the pupil and iris, I know it helped me! And..... the eyebrows are bakcwards and wierd, the thin part goes at the end of the face and the wider part goes near the nose bridge.
Don't worry if your teacher didn't liked it! I loooooove pencil drawings, they are my favorites. And remember beauty is in the eye of the beholder!
I hope this help you improve your work!
http://www.drawspace.com/lessons/lesson.php?id=d03
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| Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 8:51 pm Post subject: |
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this is awsome!
her hair looks soooo realalistic!
i love her lips and eyes also
great job 
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| Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2008 4:27 am Post subject: |
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Gracee, your drawing is also as it is, beautiful.
I also, liked the way you had drawn her eyes staring at something other than staring into space. And her hair also looks magnificent. The way you had let it get curved and curled.
But the thing is, you should have drawn her neck and a little part of her shoulders. Because, I kept on thinking that was a lion's head when I look at the bottom of the picture. It looks as if the girl's head suspended in mid-air. There's another thing, the background made the picture a little unnatural. If you had it as you had it before you remodalized it by 'Paint' it would have been better.
So, I have to say the drawing was beautiful.
Good luck.
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| Posted: Wed Nov 26, 2008 1:07 am Post subject: |
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| Okay I like this drawing but the purple paint off of the paint program...eh, you could of done without. I loved her eyes though! They look like flowers, but you could move the eyes over just a little bit. Also, her hair is awesome. I love the way you made it flip out! Great job!
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