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 Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 3:16 pm Post subject: Flying Dragon |
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This is good!
One problem..if you could do something like make it a tad smaller, then it would be much easier to review.
Anyway, the pose of this seemingly oriental dragon is great! I like the way it's twisting on itself and such.
If you could work on muscle development, and the hands. then it would be even better. The paws seem a little flat -maybe you could add some more visible, perhaps protuberant claws to them?
And for me it's a little too sketchy. But that's just my opinion
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Okay. Now this is just freakish. Your drawing is exactly how I picture the dragons in one of my stories!!! I just can't draw them. 
Very good! I would like it if you made it a little smaller. It took me a very long time to find the head.  The fur on the tail is very good. It must have taken you a while to fill all of that in with a pen. Its head might be a teeny-tiny bit too big in proportion to its neck, and its neck seems too narrow for the rest of its body. The little anteana-things sprouting from its upper cheekbones are different sizes. The one on our right is a little longer, I think. Maybe I'm just halusinating.
I really like the eye. It's very intense. The other eye is higher, though, so they're uneven.
Other than that, I think it's a great piece of artwork and I wish that I could draw as well as you.
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Dang! Pretty sweet!
The only thinga that I really saw was that one of the hands seemed kinda backwards... And, as the other two people said, it could be just a bit smaller... And the thing that Searria H. said about the neck, head, and eye. That's about it!
But still, good job! Truly amazing!
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| Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 8:59 pm Post subject: |
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Very great. I had to save it to my photos to actually see it though. As said try and down size it. I love dragons so I'll give you a ten out of ten. Good job!
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wwwwwwwwwwwoooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!  this is very very very
good. I didn't find any problems with it other than its to large! Other than that VERY GOOD!
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| Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 1:03 am Post subject: |
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Right, well I love it. Like it's been said above it is a tad large. And now for some things I noticed that could use some touch-ups.
-The head seems to be smaller than it should be, but that's just me.
-The front and hind feet don't seem to have much detail, they seem to be thin, and just a little lacking. Of what I do not know.
On the other hand all the detail you were able to put into it is amazing, and the fact that you did so with a pen complete astounds me. The under body is wonderful as well. You did a great job.
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| Is it okay if I use this as my deskopt picture??
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| Posted: Sat Sep 27, 2008 11:38 am Post subject: :P |
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| Lol sure! i dont mind
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| Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 7:08 am Post subject: |
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Well, now there's an original fantastically briliant dragon. I really can't belive that you actually drew that. The lines are just perfect and the brush work done only by the pencil is also briliant. I like the twist of the dragon and it's or (I think it's her) tail. But it seemed a little too long to me. But an excellant drawing.
Well done and good luck.
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