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wow, this is great. your attention to detail is outstanding!  its very realistic actually and possesses so much detail that it blows the viewer away.
really great work!
i espcially love the head
it reminds me of sapphira in the book Eragon if that means anything to you! te he
well yeh, fab work! youre getting a gold star!
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| Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 9:38 pm Post subject: |
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O
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This is outstanding! Don't tell me you drew this; I still don't believe it.
The details are perfect and the stance is just great!
Oh man, I'm so envious. I can't draw for my life.
*wondering why you can't give more than 1 star*
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| Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 11:21 pm Post subject: |
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WOW!!!!!!!!
This drawing is insanely good.
If you haven't posted more drawings on this site, you should.
PM me if you do.
Good job.
You get an A++++++
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| Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 9:02 pm Post subject: |
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Just as before outstanding. Though again I had to save it to my photos. FIx it and you may get more reveiws on your wonderful work or you could get an account on deviantart and post it there. If you care to show details cut it into peices to show it better posting the links with the original photo.
Just a though.
Good luck on your next one. 
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AWSOME im actually in awe right now! 
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| Posted: Fri Sep 26, 2008 9:24 pm Post subject: |
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Hiya Gracce
OMG!!!! this is worth the o.m.g. But i would love it if i could actually see the whole picture all together,
I love the detail on the dragons face mostly.
Love
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| Posted: Sat Sep 27, 2008 11:21 am Post subject: |
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If I actually ever get one of my books ready I'll hire you to draw the cover 
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| Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2008 2:50 pm Post subject: lol |
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wow thankyou! will you pay me? 
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| Posted: Thu Oct 02, 2008 2:08 am Post subject: |
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Hmmm. I thought for sure I reviewed this already. Oh, well. Better late than never.
Personally, I like this dragon a little more that your flying dragon because it has more dimension and detail. Very nicely done.
Although the little things coming out of its head are a nice touch, they remind me of those little wormy roots that sprout from potatoes. 
The horn closest to us sort of blends into his neck. I can sort of tell from the thickness of the other horn where it stops, but its edge and the necks edge share the same line. If you could separate those just a tad...
I love the shading in the wings! Looks somewhat like leopard print.
The tail is very good as well. I like the position it's in, and it looks very realistic.
The head bothers me a bit. The rest of the body is so detailed with scales and everything, that the head just seeems abruptly white. I think you did that so you wouldn't clutter the details of the facial features, and that's a smart thing to do. However, to help the flow a little bit, I would start making the scales more sparse a little further down his neck so the head isn't suddenly white. That might look weird, though. In that case, maybe you could just take a pencil and shade in the head a little bit.
Same problem with the top of his right wing. I would shade it in a bit.
His shadow on the ground is also a nice touch.
Keep in mind that all of these are nitpicks, so your drawing is already absolutely beautiful.
I agree with Lord Anzius. Your flying dragon would go perfectly with one of my books! And yes, I would pay you. That is, if I get paid, which I probably won't because my book most likely won't sell. 
So. Now I have officially run out of your drawings to critique. 
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| Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 3:14 pm Post subject: |
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wow.... That is a mighty dragon. I take drawing lessons but I cant draw that well.
You are hired to make me a book cover that I wrote. 
awsome job!!!!!
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| Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 5:31 pm Post subject: |
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Wait a minute robert... I'll hire her first
LOL.
And yet again... i soo have to say this. awesom job
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