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PostPosted: Wed Sep 17, 2008 6:48 pm    Post subject: Math? Reply with quote 
Math?



I'd rather take a bath,



But the numbers,



are as important as slumber.



Because,



If you don't know what is 1+2,



I'm sorry but your very, very screwed.



But sometimes I even see people crying,



So trust me sometimes math feels like slow dying.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 17, 2008 10:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
YES! THis is exsactly how I feel about MATH! Its important but I HATE IT SO MUCH!!!!! >_<

Nice word use, and comparing math to such things as a slow and painful death.

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So trust me sometimes math feels like slow dying.



My favorite part.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 17, 2008 11:56 pm    Post subject: Re: Math? Reply with quote
Lord Anzius wrote:
Math?

I'd rather take a bath,

But the numbers,

are as important as slumber.

Because,

If you don't know what is 1+2,

I'm sorry but your very, very screwed.

But sometimes I even see people crying,

So trust me sometimes math feels like slow dying.


Hehe! I liked this... very cute! But I suggest changing the second line; it seems forced to me.

My favorite part was the third and fourth lines. How true!
Good job!

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 18, 2008 4:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
thanks Very Happy

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 18, 2008 7:37 am    Post subject: Math Reply with quote
... Ok... Its more funny then my Breakdown, i must admit. *giggle* Smile

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 8:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I couldnt stop laughing.
It was funny.
Awsome job!!!!!!!!!!

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