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PostPosted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 2:56 am    Post subject: Black Stars Reply with quote

Yeah, hey. Guess who? Guess what?
Razz
So, I have the first chapter of my manga up.

WARNING: Last three pages were terribly drawn TT.TT

Yeah.

Cover page = http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs30/f/2008/160/a/c/Black_Stars_Volume_One_cover_by_Archstormangel.jpg

Page 1 - http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs30/f/2008/163/d/5/Black_Stars___1_1_1_by_Archstormangel.jpg

Page 2 - http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs32/f/2008/199/5/1/Black_Stars_Chp__1_Pg__2_by_Archstormangel.jpg

Page 3 - http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs31/f/2008/199/4/7/Black_Stars_chp__1_pg__3_by_Archstormangel.jpg

Page 4 - http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs32/f/2008/199/5/b/Black_Stars_chp__1_pg__4_by_Archstormangel.jpg

Page 5 - http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs32/f/2008/199/f/b/Black_Stars_chp__1_pg__5_by_Archstormangel.jpg

Page 6 - http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs31/f/2008/199/5/e/Black_Stars_chp__1_pg__6_by_Archstormangel.jpg

Page 7 - http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs32/f/2008/199/b/4/Black_Stars_chp__1_pg__7_by_Archstormangel.jpg

Page 8 - http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs32/f/2008/199/0/9/Black_Stars_chp__1_pg__8_by_Archstormangel.jpg

Page 9 - http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs32/f/2008/199/b/9/Black_Stars_chp__1_pg__9_by_Archstormangel.jpg

Page 10 - http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs32/f/2008/199/8/a/Black_Stars_chp__1_pg__10_by_Archstormangel.jpg

Page 11 - http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs31/f/2008/199/a/e/Black_Stars_chp__1_pg__11_by_Archstormangel.jpg

Page 12 - http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs31/f/2008/199/b/7/Black_Stars_chp__1_pg__12_by_Archstormangel.jpg

Page 13 - http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs31/f/2008/232/f/9/Black_Stars_chapter_1_Page_13_by_Archstormangel.jpg

Page 14 - http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs31/f/2008/232/8/c/Black_stars_Chapter_1_Page_14_by_Archstormangel.jpg

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Page 16 - http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs32/f/2008/232/4/b/Black_Stars_Chapter_1_Page_16_by_Archstormangel.jpg

Page 17 - http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs31/f/2008/232/8/c/Black_Stars_Cahpter_1_Page_17_by_Archstormangel.jpg
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 08, 2008 2:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Your cover art is incredible! I love the colors you chose as well as the way its drawn. Unfortunately my computer is too slow to load the others pages, but it seems as if this manga would be a good read.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 2:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

8D
Well at least you saw the cover art. Razz
Thanks so much!
Sorry. ^^;

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 11:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

IK love how you draw. I still can't seem to draw someone over and over and over again in diffrent posistions...

But. I would recomend not putting a whole paage of words on two sepreat pages. (9 10) As you go along you want to input it so the reader doesn't get bored. (just a thought) ANd I would recomend takeing each page into paint and typing up the words from the bubbles. (you could erase the words and type them up....) Um... That's all I got for now.

Beatiful work though.

Have a good day!

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 8:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ah, yeah, my dad said that. 'Too much text kthx'. xD I just didn't know what to cut out. Razz And yeah, I need to do that. But that would be so hardddd TT.TT

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 12:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Woot! that was awesome! I can't seem to sit down long enough and be so determined as to get that far with my art work. I also like the cover and good characters! GO TWIN POWER!!! lol.
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 3:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

LOL, thanks Sam. Yeah, considering I'm a twin, I figured I might as well stick a pair in their 8D xD

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