Ghostly Plane



There is a place suspended in a space 

(or rather lack of space)

within this place.

It is a nothing (it has no mass)

but  extends further than the universe.

Only there may a person go

and yet leave no absence behind.



I speak in riddles

for only in this tongue may comprehension dawn

and grow and bloom until it spawns

the answer (you don't know?)



Within this sphere (or could it be a cube?

Quite possibly and probably,

afterall our minds, they move in squares

and here we have a third dimension,

going unawares, but for myself.)



So, within this sphere (which I've asserted

is a cube)

there are no limits - no prevention - and its perverted

by our minds, which have affect (but no control)

and perhaps it is a minor defect

of the whole.



But the whole of - what - 

could you be thinking;

all those cogs are turning

(squares and circles) in your mind.

It is the realm of course,

it is the place where we all fall,

where we unwind.



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A critique to the first person who can tell me what it is...



And all advice is much appreciated. I'm thinking currently that the beginning needs re-drafting a little? But I'm open to the opinions of others =)