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Love came here to stay

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 6:36 pm    Post subject: Love came here to stay Reply with quote

Love will never go away,
love came here to stay,
till the dusk of time,
ooh,

Love will never go away,
love came here to stay,
oh baby,
ooh,

can you feel it on your heart,
It's knocking so, so ,so, so hard,
Your heart is,
bounding harder that the winds,

Loose the hate and agony,
replace it with sincerity,
how luxurious love can be,
when pain is not here to see,
the happiness,
the greatness,
the power of love is here,
it can't break away,
the love is here to stay.


Love will never go away,
love came here to stay,
till the dusk of time,
ooh,

Love will never go away,
love came here to stay,
oh baby,
ooh,


maybe someday again,
we'll hear our hearts bounding in the wind,
oh baby,
someday again,

cuddle next to me,
in the darkest night,
kiss me on the lips,
and say good night,

Love will never go away,
love came here to stay,
till the dusk of time,
ooh,

Love will never go away,
love came here to stay,
oh baby,
ooh,

till death makes us fall apart,
you'll be so close to my heart,

see me looking in your eyes,
you'll see the feelings of mine,
I'd come looking for you in the night,
I would even get you the moon from the sky.

Love will never go away,
love came here to stay,
till the dusk of time,
ooh,

Love will never go away,
love came here to stay,
oh baby,
ooh,

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 9:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This son is really good for your first lyrics! I think it needs like a guitar solo or a piano solo or
something but other than that i think it is pretty good! How do winds bound though? I don't get that.
I also think it can use just a little more work. You know, just play with the words some more.
GOOD JOB THOUGH!
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 6:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have the chords ready for it. I have played it on the guitar. I just can't remember the names of the chords I play.... I just play.....



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PostPosted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 12:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy Hey I like it a lot this is good

Cant wait to read your other lyrics in the future Very Happy
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 3:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Your songs are getting sexyer and sexyer. I liked evrything but I think it is more like a poem maybe you should move it to another catogary. But is one of the best romantic writeings I read on this website.
pretty good. Very Happy

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