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PostPosted: Sat Aug 30, 2008 11:18 am    Post subject: Feed Meee.. Reply with quote
Okay okay.

I want a new star ^^ Sooo, it's time for you all to post your links here and I will review them all! Oh yes, but you must.. Give me vitual boo-berry muffins!

-Drooled.- Yummy.

So c'mon folks. Step right up.

Things I will review;

- Any Kind of Poetry
- Romantic Fiction
- Fantasy Fiction
- Action/Adventure Fiction
- Lyrics
- Photography & Art

Completed;

"Ours" by Azila
"A Bloodied Rose; Part One" by Tabithalillian

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 4:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
No requests yet? I'll start it off: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post419983.html#419983

It's called "Ours" and it's in Other Fiction... I hope that's okay with you?

Thank you! And please let me know if there's anything I can crit in return. Smile
~Azila~

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 11:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
ok, please review my two storys, one may be a short story and one is a work in progress and much longer. . .here are the links both a romantic vampire fiction and I am trying to break free fromt he twilight mold with both of them:
A Bloodied Rose:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35039.html
My Take On Phantom Of The Opera:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35505.html

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 9:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Come one! Roll up, roll up!

Next please ;D

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 4:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35447.html

Would you, please? =D

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 27, 2008 1:49 pm    Post subject: :D Reply with quote
Heya,

I've finished the review of your story, by the way, so go check it out Very Happy

Would you review this for me:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36307.html

Thanks !

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 4:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
If you have time, I need a lot of help with this story: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic27228.html

If you get around to it, I would appreciate it...

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 2:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
If you wouldn't mind....

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36769.html

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 3:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
If you don't mid I'd like reviews for chapter 3 and 4 of my novel...
And umm...don't worry you don't have to read the previous chapters to understand this one...
YOu may be a bit confused with the characters intoduced previously but that won't be much of a problem...waiting for you review!!!

Thsanks a ton in advance!!!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36721.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36734.html
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