sheismorphing
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Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:54 am Post subject: It is a Time |
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It is a time
For change and a time
For growth
Chain smoking and no boundaries
“is that really me?”
She asks herself
No.
It is a part of her
A path which lead to many
Some never to have been predicted
Others dreamt of
And more so than not
Absence
Paths lead to solitude
And reflection
In doses
Like those taken each waking, of a night
Or a day’s rest
That rest, not the usual
Bedtime is whenever you may
Get around to it
And she
Only occasionally gets the norm
“fine by me.”
She says
But isn’t everything?
What is not for her
Others may wonder
What is serious to her
What drives her
What infuriates her
Nothing of the latter
Though driven by friends
And serious about their opinions
She judges not
Having been judged
Could be a reason to, in high form
Though oppositely affected her
“why?”
She asks
Does the soul choose
To fight
To yell, to cause discomfort on others
Of the same degree
They need it?
They cannot control it?
“they should work on that.”
She thinks.
And to participate in her thought
She hopes to benefit those
With the fury
Hoping, she chooses to be proactive
Study
Work hard
Love harder
Think deeply
Converse appropriately
Care always.
“I really do care, though.”
She tells another
Who cannot fathom the substantiality
Of that remark
In time
They may
And hopefully, they will strip
Shed
Evaporate
The fury beads
Bursting inside
Still lovely beads
Of purple and blue
Meshing, mixing, sparkling
Sparkling like their eyes
Which tear with each deeper truth
Exposed
She loves them
“I choose to not specify their sex.”
She wants to add into
This
Because they
May represent anyone
But to her
They represent a dynamic, powerful
Reasonable, independent, driven child
Having not yet extensively developed
Appropriately so
In some ways more than she
In some ways, not near
But in those, they may stride past her
And without the polar opposite tendencies
The two would not have been put in each other’s reach
They may have impacted others
In different realms
But in those which hold strong
And unique
To their companionship
The cherries dangle
Side by side
Full of tender, vulnerable details
Which are only cradled by a firm
yet supple shell
shiny, like them
shining for themselves and others
lasting briefly compared to the universe
yet able to pass on
their goodness
for generations
and what she left with the other
and their mark on her
will, undoubtedly
show
in their offspring
time and time away from now
and maybe that is why
they were united
and for that
she will always know,
“love rules us, we may clash, but isn’t that what stands out about the eighties?”
And they respond, “worth it all, baby.”
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| This may be hard to relate to or fully understand because I tend to write not regarding that other people don't know who I'm referring to. In a nutshell, this is what I was feeling the other day after spending a year living with a best friend who is extre |
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_________________ The time is now. Thrive, care, motivate. Positivity moves the world. We are capable. |
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Lord Anzius
I eat souls.... they taste like chicken. Speaker of the Forum

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Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 9:49 am Post subject: |
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| The Poem was a one that makes one think, to look at world in another way, it was dramatic, and i think it desserves a star, it is one of best I have read and I'm waiting to read more poems as good as this. You have my compliments.
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