This is my first story so please read it and critic
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"DANIEL ROWERT"
I jumped as I heard my name being shouted.I had been so absorbed in a book that I had quite forgotten my surroundings.I peered over the book to see my sister glaring at me.
"What?" I asked unconcernedly
"Do you know what the time is?" She asked angrily
"Yes,It's half past seven.why?" I asked wondering why Kitrina was really angry.
"WHY?Sera's party starts in 15 minutes,in uncle Verone's house." Shouted Kitrina"And you're
not even ready yet"
Of course,how could I forget? Even with Kitrina,my mum and dad reminding me of it every hour.
Sera is my second sister.She is twelve years old while Kitrina is elevan years old.I'm fourteen
years old and the responsibility of taking care of my sister had bestowed upon me as both of our
parents did jobs.
One of my uncle's is holding the party for Sera as she had passed a difficult test last
week.
I jumped up from the couch and ran to my room.
"Now, he remembers" muttered Kitrina
I looked at the mirrors which reflected my blue eyes.I combed my brown hair and wore my
best clothes.
To tell you the truth I wasn't that much interested in the party.But my parents had threatened
to lock me in my room if I didn't go.
After both of us had gotten ready we went to the driveway to take our usual taxi.(our parents
were already at the party)
After a few uneventful minutes in the taxi,we were at the party.
I paid the driver as Kitrina ran into the house.
Loud rock n' roll music clawed its way in to my eardrums making them throb as I followed my
my sister into the party.
As I expected the party was lame.A few of my uncle,aunts and cousins were there.Mostly there
were little kids and friends of Sera.Throughout the party all I was thinking of was whether
I would die of boredom when at last the party ended at ten in the night.
I was happy to drag both of my sisters out of the party.
"Hey, I want to say goodbye to my friends!" whinned Sera looking beesechingly at me out of her green eyes.
"I need to take you two home before you fall asleep" I joked
"Ha ha" both of them said sarcastically
We waited until our taxi came as our parents were staying at the party for a while to talk with the others.
But when the taxi came, we noticed that it wasn't the regular driver we know.
"Where is the other driver?" I asked the driver as we got into the taxi
"He took the day off" grunted the driver"Where to?"
"6106, Darson street" I answered
The next few minutes passed in silence.Kitrina fell asleep after a half an hour.
I was about to wake her when the driver pulled the taxi into a completly different road.
"Hey,that's not the way to our house!" I suddenly said
"It's a short cut I know" growled the driver
Soon,we were going through a dense forest.
The driver led the car into the heart of the forest and stopped.
He turned right around his seat and pointed a gun at my forehead.
"Get out, go on, get out of my car before I shoot you" the driver said
"But my brother asked you to take us to our home not to a forest!" cried Sera tears flowing
down her cheeks.
The driver cocked the gun.
"Are you going to get out or do I have to shoot you?" he asked
We got out of the car before the man could shoot us.
As soon as we got out the driver drove the taxi away dissappearing in(to the) dense forest.
"What do we do now?" asked Kitrina half-scared, half-angry
I walked a little away staring in every direction.I looked around, my eyes adjusting to the light of the forest. Large trees of different size grew around me. The forest seemed too silent,making it seem too dense. I could hear my sisters' heart beats.
"I guess we'll have to find our way out of this" I answered"Come on you two"
I turned to look at them, but they were gone.
Disappeared!!
