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PostPosted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 12:41 pm    Post subject: Blinkingly-good Crits Reply with quote
I want something to review!

*points to review counter*

Still below 5000! Get them sent in, I offer high-quality reviews, I am more proficient in the prose areas but I will take a look at other areas.


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PostPosted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 9:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Seeing as you've had no other requests could you please review the prologue and first chapter of my sad excuse for a novel 'Magic Carpet Ride'

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic32817.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33207.html

Neither are finsihed but it's always good to know how things are coming along Very Happy

Merci beaucoup!

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 2:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 2:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
*Sighs* Haha, if you insist. Actually, I'm just finishing up a very big edit - I'd love it if you'll look at that when I'm done. I'll let you know. Smile

(You must be bored to stalk my guestbook for this! Wink)

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Boredom? *shifty eyes*

Sure no problem, just say the word Smile

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 6:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I'm also almost done with a massive edit. I'll post the link when it's up.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 4:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
OK!

Come on people, all these lovely pieces of work are looking at me for a review and I don't know which to go for!

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 6:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I'm back.

Okay, the link is:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33373.html

P.S. I give points to good reviewers

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 2:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hello Very Happy


If you please

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33396.html

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 11:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic29564.html

Scroll down until you get to the Gandhi quote and the chapter called "Drych-ddelwedd".

Thanks! Very Happy

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 5:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hey, this is a story I started a while back and I wanted to know if I should drop it or continue. Please review. Just an all around review of you have time; character, plot, dialog, etc.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic32148.html

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I must bombard you! D:

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Murder & Investigation 1 - Before the Murder

Murder & Investigation 2 - Discovery of the Murder

Eh, sorry for the lame titles. The first one has like a bajallion critiques, but the last one has none. Thank you so much.

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I completely forgot about this thread--I will have these done before I go on holiday, thanks!

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