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Jamie_rocks
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 Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 5:59 pm Post subject: Free Reviews! |
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Hey! If you need a review just post the link here. I'm on every day, so I should get back to you quickly.
I REVIEW
-Anything fiction, I don't care about the length.
-I go through them in line-by-line form, comments in red and corrections bold. No matter how long they are.
I DON'T REVIEW
-Poetry. Sorry, but I'm not good at that.
-Lyrics. Same thing. I don't enough about them to review them good.
-Non-Fiction. Unless it's interesting. I might, but I really don't want to review your fifty page English essay on the art of punctuation or something like that.
-Scripts. Again no experience. Trust me, you don't want me there.
-Fanfic.
WHAT I WANT IN RETURN
-Ninja Training
-Posts on my user guest book
-If you're not busy, reviews on any of my stories
-And just because they said I couldn't ask for it, a kitten mailed to me so I can sacrifice it to the SPEW gods.
So, link away! |
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| Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 6:54 pm Post subject: |
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well sorry i don't know how to link yet, but i have five chapters (fantasy fiction) in my portfolio under "Canaby Witches"
so please
thanks
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Jamie_rocks
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| Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 1:59 am Post subject: |
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| Okay, I'm on it. It may take a while to review all five chapters though. |
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Jamie_rocks
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| Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 5:48 am Post subject: |
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| It's done. |
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Jamie_rocks
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| Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 5:22 pm Post subject: |
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Okay, Wiseman, I'm done with chapters one & two.
Ferris: I'll get right on it. |
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Jamie_rocks
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| Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 10:40 pm Post subject: |
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Okay.
Wiseman: Still working on chapter three.
Ferris: I finished the first one... done.
Bear: I'll get right on it... done.
Still working on yours wiseman.
Anyone else? |
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Jamie_rocks
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| Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 4:45 am Post subject: |
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| Come on people! Give me something to review. I'm bored out of my wits! |
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| Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 7:47 am Post subject: |
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| I would like you to review my story. But first I would like to let you know a few thing: 1) It is meant to be funny near the beginning and on till the end area, then it gets serious. 2) I'm not funny and 3) It is meant to be unrealistic at points. |
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Jamie_rocks
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| Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 10:40 pm Post subject: |
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| Hey, sorry I haven't been on in a while; the computer was down. I'll do my best to get caught up. |
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