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andimlovegalore
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 Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 7:45 pm Post subject: Free Reviews =D |
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Hey =] I'll review things eventually if you throw it my way!
I'm back at school now so I don't have as much time as I did before. Don't hesitate to ask me though! I'll get round to it ^_^
So I'll review:
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sci-fi
supernatural (not vampires though, if that's alright, I just can't get into that)
general fiction (even high school drama!)
angsty dark stuff
poetry - lyrical, dramatic, other. I'm not so good at the story-telling type of poetry though =[
fanfiction too - I might not have seen it! But I like to review fanfic. I guess just tell me what it's on and I'll see if I can manage it.
Also, I'll do any rating. I think I'm old enough to deal with R for whatever reason.
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Okay, I have one. It's a supernatural horror (or at least it's supposed to be). I think it might be a little long for you to go through in red, but that's up to you if you want to.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic30377.html
Thanks! And if you need anything reviewed I have a topic on here too! |
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andimlovegalore
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| Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 6:46 pm Post subject: |
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| jamie_rocks wrote: |
Okay, I have one. It's a supernatural horror (or at least it's supposed to be). I think it might be a little long for you to go through in red, but that's up to you if you want to.
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Sure thing =] I'm on it! |
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| Posted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 3:36 pm Post subject: |
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| damn mine's sort of ... romance with a thousand things thrown in. If you want to look (high school drama just a tad...haha) in here: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33253.html if that works. |
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| Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 1:51 am Post subject: |
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Hey, I'm back.
Mainly thanks to your review, I've rewritten the first chapter. Could you please check it out?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33373.html |
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| Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 3:08 pm Post subject: |
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Hello, well I really really need some helpful reviewing on my piece well actually its more of my first book that I decided to write. I'd appreciate it if you took a look at it and gave some advice or anything really.
Here's the link:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic32465.html
P.S. If you can, could you look at the other two chapters. The links are on top of the page when you go to my first chapter. Thanks,
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andimlovegalore
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| Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 11:26 pm Post subject: |
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Niccy, Angel -> all done.
Jamie I'll get to yours soon! I wanna read ch.2 as well =] |
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| Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 8:03 pm Post subject: |
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Jared and Jon =D all done! Hope that's alright with you. Any Qs or anything just go ahead and ask me.
Any one else? |
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| Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 8:18 pm Post subject: |
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Kate has 8 Lives, you seem experienced and I would love to have your opnion!  Thanks so much! |
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| Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 7:19 pm Post subject: |
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Oh, I guess I'll ask. It's a Zelda fanfiction, but I don't think you'll have too much trouble with it...There's nothing much really I need comment on, a couple people have already gone over it, but what the heck.
Just opine on whatever suits your fancy, whatever you find kinda strange. Enjoy!
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| Posted: Sun Aug 10, 2008 4:04 pm Post subject: |
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CurlyQ - I've done first chapter =] I'll do more if you like?
Gladius - I don't know much about Zelda so I'll just have to comment on like... story rather than cannon or character. But yeah =] I'll have a look soon. |
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| Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 5:49 pm Post subject: |
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Yay !!! Reviews !!!!
I'm working on a story called Murder & Mayhem. It's for a contest that ends on the 20th so I'm really low on time  Do you reckon you could review it before then? It's not short, so I get it if it's too much. If that one doesn't work out, feel free to review another piece of my work if you have time to waste 
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