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PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 4:20 am    Post subject: Child abuse Reply with quote

This is a poem my frind sent me. Is was so sad, and so good i just had to share it with the world. It made me cry!





My name is Sarah



I am but three,



My eyes are swollen



I can not see.



I must be stupid,



I must be bad.



What else could have made



My daddy so mad?



I wish I were better,



I wish I weren't ugly.



Then mabey my mommy



would still want to hug me.



I can't speak at all,



I can't do a wrong,



Or else I'm locked up



All the day long.



When I awake I'm all alone.



The house is dark,



My folks arn't home.



When my mommy does come



I'll try and be nice,



So mabye I'll get just



One whipping tonight.



Don't make a sound!



I just heared a car!



My daddy is back



From Charlie's Bar.



I hear him curse,



My name he calls,



I press myself



Against the wall.



I try and hide



From his evil eyes,



I'm so afraid now



I'm starting to cry.



He finds me weeping,



He shouts ugly words.



He says it's my fault



That he suffers at work.



He slaps me and hits me



And yells at me more.



I finally get free,



And I run for the door.



He's already locked it,



And I start to bawl.



He takes me and throws me



Againts the hard wall.



I fall to the floor



My bones are nearly broken,



And my daddy continues



With more bad words spoken.



'I'm sorry', I scream,



But now it's much to late,



His face has been twisted



into unimaginable hate.



The hurt and the pain,



Again and Again,



Oh please God have murcy!



Oh please let it end!



And he finally stops



And heads for the door,



While I lay motionless



Sprawled on the floor.



My name is Sarah



And I am but three



Tonight my Daddy,



Murded me.



retold by me

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 4:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for sharing, but the poetry section is for poems written by you only. Otherwise it is plagarism.

Thanks!

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