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niteowl
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 Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2005 3:46 pm Post subject: Risen from the Grave |
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I was the princess
Of my little snowglobe world.
It all fell into place
Everything was okay
Until that day.
As I turned my back,
You swiped your hand
And it all came tumbling down.
As I lay there, on the floor,
You turned away
And you left me there.
Alone, afraid, unable to scream.
I couldn't believe
That you betrayed me.
Now I'm back!
Risen from the grave
Gonna take back what's mine
The hour of revenge has come
And I won't let you get away
The years crept
And now you've gone
Further into the dark.
So many souls you tore apart.
And you broke so many hearts.
You've got the nerve
To call me friend
And try to hold me close.
Let me tell you now,
You should've done that
On that day so long ago.
Now I'm back!
Risen from the grave!
Gonna take back what's mine
The hour of revenge has come
And I won't let you get away.
Alone and naked,
Staring at smashed remnants
Of my world.
Even as I bleed,
I crawl to you.
'Cause you're some stort of magnet,
I'm hopelessly attracted to you...
But that doesn't
Change the fact
That you destroyed
Everything I had.
Don't think I've forgotten
How innocent I was
But it's been a long time
I'm all grown up now
And...
Now I'm back!
Risen from the grave.
Gonna take back what's mine
The hour of the revenge has come
And I won't let you get away.
No you're not gonna get away. |
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marching_gurl89
your unoffical liberal talking history book
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| Nite I liked it and I liked the chorus |
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