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kutestuff003
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Age: 16 Joined: 02 Jun 2005 Posts: 40 Reviews: 22 Country: Minnesota 300 Points
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Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2005 4:31 am Post subject: DAD |
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You were always there when I needed you,
But never near when I needed you to hold me,
You were there to teach me to be me,
And I appreciate that.
Though you may be gone for long periods of time,
I always remember you are here in my mind,
Though at times we have our thick and our thin,
We always find a new place to begin,
We have our ups and our downs but never do forget,
The days we spent so funny and ignorant.
You bathed me when I was born,
And even cut my cord,
Now you take me lots of places,
That we can afford.
I love you Dad,
And I know you love me,
Even though were apart,
I know whatever happens you will still be in my heart.
Dedicated: To Dad with all of my Love
Kaitlyn |
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Elizabeth
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 Gender:  Age: 17 Joined: 07 Dec 2004 Posts: 3023 Reviews: 1160 Country: If I told you I would have to kill you 300 Points
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Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2005 4:38 am Post subject: |
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KAitlyn your dad is so amazing (taught me how to use a drill )
This was a very sweet poem to him and if you ask Shadow Knight he'll probably ask why I was crying and you can tell him it was because I read this. You're dad sounds like the ultimate dad. Mine on the other hand... well, he has a few kinks that I need to work out.
You have very good potential. I am envious of you yet again. But great work. I hope you showed this to your dad. I bet he would like to see this. |
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