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AEOTS part1 the beginning ch1
AEOTS part1 the beginning ch1

by spike71294 in Romantic Fiction
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This thread was created on June 11, 2005
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 11, 2005 4:31 am    Post subject: DAD Reply with quote

You were always there when I needed you,

But never near when I needed you to hold me,

You were there to teach me to be me,

And I appreciate that.



Though you may be gone for long periods of time,

I always remember you are here in my mind,

Though at times we have our thick and our thin,

We always find a new place to begin,

We have our ups and our downs but never do forget,

The days we spent so funny and ignorant.



You bathed me when I was born,

And even cut my cord,

Now you take me lots of places,

That we can afford.



I love you Dad,

And I know you love me,

Even though were apart,

I know whatever happens you will still be in my heart.



Dedicated: To Dad with all of my Love



Kaitlyn

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 11, 2005 4:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

KAitlyn your dad is so amazing (taught me how to use a drill Twisted Evil)
This was a very sweet poem to him and if you ask Shadow Knight he'll probably ask why I was crying and you can tell him it was because I read this. You're dad sounds like the ultimate dad. Mine on the other hand... well, he has a few kinks that I need to work out.
You have very good potential. I am envious of you yet again. But great work. I hope you showed this to your dad. I bet he would like to see this.

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