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A not so satisfying memory

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 11, 2005 4:20 am    Post subject: A not so satisfying memory Reply with quote

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The love of my life left today,

all because he was to tired to wait,

I kept saying "No" I can't do it not yet,

He said "Oh, Yeah" I'll make a bet.

He threw me down and tied me up,

I was hurting so badly the hate inside,

He hit me, he slapped me, then he laughed,

He said watch this and he raped me to death.

I tried to stop him with all my might,

I can't believe I put up with the fight.

After he did that he tied my hands tight,

He said "haha", Look now,

You did it tonight.

I cried so hard I think I bled,

So many crude thoughts inside my head.

Later, that week I got a strange call,

They asked if he did it,

I screamed YES HE DID IT ALL.

Please don't tell I begged,

All they said was were here to stay.

One night and my life ebbed away.

Why did I let him?

How could I never tell,

With all this pain inside me,

Maybe I should just rot in hell.

Those days are over,

my life is still gone,

Maybe I should just stop playing such a crude song.



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PostPosted: Sat Jun 11, 2005 4:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

OK, this is talent that I never knew you had because you never took time to SHOW ME KAITLYN!!! This was so amazing and it made me scared... I haven't any idea why. It was so brilliant... And that whole love of my life stuff just made it a bit sadder and it makes you think (me anyway, i like to think and therefore I am a bad american) that if he was really your true love that he wouldn't do that. I hope this is all your imagination and not real. I'll cry if it''s real.

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