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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 8:04 pm    Post subject: Ready to Critique Reply with quote
Ok...I have been working on my critiques (hence my crit disappearance as of late). I am ready to give full, in-depth critiques. So, if you would like your work to be critted, please tell me! I will not critique fanfic or lyrics. I will focus on grammer&&punctuation as well as the three D's: diction, dialogue, and development.

yay?

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I really love your style of writing, so I trust you to be a kick-butt and ruthless critic. Very Happy

I need reviews on anything, really. Click on my portfolio and go nuts, if you wish.

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 11:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Sounds great. I'll get right on that.

Anyone else? C'mon guys!

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 12:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I was called away for 4th of July, and such, but I'm back, and I'll critique both of your things soon.

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