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Wojovox
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 Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 11:40 am Post subject: |
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What is this seem to be?
What does it mean?
What does it want?
What does it need from me?
I know, PEER EVALUATION........I don't know what everyone else is picturing in their mind, but I'm picking up a lot of sexual tension. Sounds like Sex, Sex, Sex to me.
"Groaning, swaying" at your feet. I know it may not be what you intended for the reader to pick up, but you yourself must admit that this poem could be perceived in such a form. It's not just me, can't say sex is on my mind right now. just picked it up here
"You go deeper in, as it comes out"
haha, Eureka........Someone needs sexual healing. |
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hobbes
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Country: i can not say that.It would comprimise our agents in the field
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| Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 12:09 pm Post subject: |
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uhhh.........not really. scribblingquill was more on to it.
I guess it could be perceived as that, but that is not what the poem is about |
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Wojovox
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| Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 12:25 pm Post subject: |
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I understand it's not what it's about.
But everyone will have their own perception. Wasn't trying to attack or criticize, sorry if it sounded that way. |
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