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Please Review My Work
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 6:35 pm    Post subject: Please Review My Work Reply with quote
so far, i've only posted two things...but i posted both of those to receive insight on them from other writers...

however, i have so far only gotten 1 review out of the 2 posts.

i really need to know how i can improve on either piece!


PLEASE REVIEW MY WRITINGS!!!

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 7:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hint: Improve your punctuation, don't use caps for emphasis, and never ever ever post "Please review my work!" in your title.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 7:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Read this:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewarticlebody.php?t=19232


Topic is locked. This is not "about an author" and you used all caps, which I had to correct, in your title.

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