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ashleylee
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Merry_Haven:
Yeah, I wanted to put some comedy in there. Everyone loves a good comedy  lol
But yeah, I like the Beatles myself, so I was like, she should be an oldies, classic girl too! 
Again, thanks so much for taking the time to read all of these. It means a lot to me! |
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| Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2008 2:25 pm Post subject: |
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Ash,
sooooo mch better.
i like the pretty-boy and pretty girl thing.
that's was wrong what carmen did. You should keep your promises.
this seems a lot more smoother than before( i know i keep repeat myself, but i mean it.)
well, i have to go to class now. i will read chapter 7 when i have time at home. |
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Night Mistress:
Thanks!
I'm glad this is getting better as the story goes on!
Thanks again, Bri! |
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| Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 8:41 pm Post subject: |
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Hey Ash,
I loved this chapter!! My favorite part was when Isaac and Sophia started singing along to the Beatles's song. It was nice that they finally had a moment together without Carmen and the rest of the gang interfering. Another lovely chapter. Can't wait to read the rest.
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| Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 8:49 pm Post subject: |
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Angel of Death:
Yeah, I love the Beatles myself so I decided to put a little me into this story hehe
Thanks so much for reading this! |
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