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PostPosted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 1:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ditto. I've been sick the last couple days = fail at writing.

I just have the last bit of this chapter to finish.. it'll take me a couple of days.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 8:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Of course you can have an extension! I really want to read some great stories, so I'm giving you another month (it works well for me, that's the beginning of my holidays).

On September 20 I will stop this competition, no matter how many entries I have. Good luck!

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 10:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Awesome, thanks so much for being so considerate! I'll def have it done by then.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 1:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Same here, I'll have it finished without a doubt then!!

Thanks for the extension!

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 3:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yay extension! Hopefully this means I can get in an entry Smile
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 6:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey Chocoholic!
I've finished the first part (the before part) and I'm about halfway through the investigation. I came up with a question though. Can the investigation include the autopsy? Because cause of death is important to my mystery.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 26, 2008 3:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey Chocoholic!

*drum roll please*

I finished the story!!!! It's a bit long, about 4,000 words in total, but I hope you like it. It's my first time writing a mystery, so I apoligize if it's a bit off.

The link is below:

Murder She Drew

I hope you like it!

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 11:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

There's only 15 days left everyone! Please note that there will not be anymore extensions after September 20. If you've only given me one or two parts, I will still count you entry, but you will lose marks.

I hope to see some more entries in the next fifteen days.

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 7:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Only 5 days left everybody! I have two complete entries, and three people who have given me two parts. I'd really like to see the last part before this contest ends.

I will be closing this contest in five days, please let me know if you'll be giving me your last part in time!

Good luck!

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 5:32 pm    Post subject: Part 3 Reply with quote

Heya,

Just finished part 3. It can be found here:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36266.html

So the MURDER & Mayhem series is now complete!!

Hope you enjoy reading it Very Happy

XxxDo

Ps. I got mildly overenthusiastic, I think, because the story is 28, 879 words long o0 Let me know if it's too much?

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 11:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yay! Thank you XxxDo!

This contest is now closed. I should have results up by October, as it's the holidays and I don't have much else to do. Then I'll start my critiquing.

Good luck!

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 2:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey, I'm so sorry I didn't get my last part in time! I will write it! but I guess not for this competition. I've got a part time job now and with this year at school.... well I'm busy! Never mind =]

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