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PostPosted: Sun Jun 05, 2005 12:52 am    Post subject: *random poem* Time 4 jan 2005 GO Reply with quote 
I wrote this days ago.. I wrote this in my religion notebook. I don't like the way I wrote it now I found it back, but I do like the topic. Razz This is stupid.. I just wanted to post this because I don't think I will or maybe want to see it again. *trows religion notebook in the barbage and rip the page off*  Here... My writing skill weren't that good by then..  maybe they're still the same but I do feel improvement in myself... Very Happy There:







*sighs* *trows the riped off page in the garbade* Yup work here is done! 



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PostPosted: Sun Jun 05, 2005 2:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I liked it a lot. How did you get the background?

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 4:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
The background?? That's my ripped off page out of my religion note book.. I'm sorry if the letters are a bit unclear to you... And the color it's the best I could have found... (my favorite too)

There.. Xia.. Thx for reading, viewing and replying!

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 3:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Heh, that made me laugh... was it supposed to? Confused Anyway, it was a bit cheesy because of the rhyming and such, but it was light-hearted (I think) so the cheesiness didn't hurt the poem too much.
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 3:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
i liked it i thought it was cool
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 10, 2005 7:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
it seemed trite to me...really trite...but I can't help you out, so I'm a turd for telling you that, sorry. Do better, because you can.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 10, 2005 7:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
cool i do that except i draw cartoon zombies and that on my jotter oh also i like drawing eyes.BUt apart from that good

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 09, 2005 6:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Its a little hard to read because of the bright yellow font on a white and purple page, but I like the idea of posting it in handwriteing, it makes it seam more.. I dont know... Real, maybe.

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