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Monki
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Oh my God! Thank you all so much! I can't believe this poem is being liked by so many! It was meant to be short but have a really strong meaning and I guess I did hit home with this one. Thank you all so much.
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This had rhythm and finality...it was simply powerful and real. The emotions that you portrayed are ones that millions of people feel. You wrote something that a lot of people can relate to and that's what else gave this poem its charm. Usually people overdo the rhyming (like I sometimes do...) but yours was perfect and it actually flowed well. I didn't see anything wrong with this and I'd suggest that you didn't make any changes because it is fine the way it is.
Bravo and keep writing,
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Monki
needs to write! Nag me, please!
Speaker of the Forum
Gender:
Age: 15
Joined: 29 Nov 2007
Posts: 523
Reviews: 87
Country: Poptart Land!!!!!
300 Points
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| Posted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 11:31 am Post subject: |
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Wow. I don't know what else to say. I guess just wow and thank you. That's all I can say. 
Thanks for the suggestion too. I guess I won't 'edit' or change it. 
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