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 Posted: Wed Jun 04, 2008 5:46 pm Post subject: Alrite!!! |
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summer 08
was what i wrote yea OK I've been getting bad reviews from it and yea i have to agree but i wanted to vend out my feeling this year i been though allot i been so much you would have to be there to know.
topic numero uno
OK so yea who had friends almost everyone does. right? well, anyways what kinda of friends make stupid rumors about you when there not true. ONLY THE BAD ONES IF YOU ASK ME!!!
Topic numero dos
eh. Spanish has been so boring for me!! i mean just because i know the language doesn't mean you can steel my homework then not give it back. So i can get a bad grade in it. Its just so super annoying.
Topic numero tres
Wow. All the drama this year was super weird and out of the ordinary. I mean wow u should of been there. And all the racism wowza i mean it.
so yea i can figure out what to write now but yea hope you like  |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 04, 2008 5:51 pm Post subject: Re: Alrite!!! |
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What on earth was the point of this? To prove to the world of YWS that you cannot spell and grammar is something you never learned?
Please correct your spelling and grammer, remove and chat speak and I will think about rereading it.
By the way "alrite" is spelled "All Right" |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 04, 2008 6:15 pm Post subject: |
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Also, this is, once again, not a story. Both this and Summer 08 would have been much better if posted in a blog, or in the community forums, rather than in the writing forums.
And why on earth would you create a new topic rather than just posting in your original topic?
I'm glad you're being understanding, though. I was afraid you'd just get mad and leave the site. |
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| Posted: Thu Jun 19, 2008 6:49 pm Post subject: |
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You know, it would be better to put this in another genre. You could classify this a slight, short biography, but (and don't take this the wrong way)...
Netspeak may be easy to use but difficult to read, as all of us here at YWS are both reading and writing actual stories, with complete sentences trying to avoid as many grammatical and spelling errors as possible. |
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| Posted: Thu Jun 19, 2008 6:57 pm Post subject: |
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This is a blog post, and as such, does not belong in the literary forums!
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