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Krupp
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 Gender:  Age: 20 Joined: 18 Mar 2008 Posts: 302 Reviews: 90 Country: Las Vegas, Nevada 246 Points
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Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 7:28 pm Post subject: Keep it Cool - Chapter 4 |
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I decided to continue the story, so here it is. Chapter 4, following Chad and his buddies to a party of younger kids. I won't ruin anything else. This is rated PG13 for strong alcohol references, and minor language:
EDIT: Wow, no downloads yet. I guess that puts me in my place. |
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Krupp
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Posted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 9:03 pm Post subject: |
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I've picked up from where I've left off, and thought I'd give Keep it Cool one more try. This is for anyone who's interested in reading it anyways. It's a nice counterpart to A Foggy Glass, which is supposed to be a darker tale...
Chapter five...
This one explores Rachel a bit more, while Chad finds himself drawn to her even more than previously. Also, the party is ended unexpectedly... |
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