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PostPosted: Sun May 25, 2008 7:00 pm    Post subject: Aedo's Review House Reply with quote
Why are you doing this?
Because I am fantastic. Razz

What do you review?
In theory, anything, but I must remind you that I am not perfect when it comes to scripts and lyrics, but I will gladly have a look.

What do you review in the review?
I will usually start with a line-by-line review, and then decide what is good, what isn't and what as a writer, you must improve on.

Fire away!

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PostPosted: Sun May 25, 2008 8:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I've got a story called Anniversary. Please, please, please critique it! Thanks.

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PostPosted: Mon May 26, 2008 11:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
No problem.

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PostPosted: Mon May 26, 2008 5:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I've got a poem?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post373484.html#373484

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PostPosted: Mon May 26, 2008 6:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Ah yes, I had a read of that earlier - time to do some reviewing!

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Thanks!

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