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nilou-and-amani
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 Gender:  Age: 16 Joined: 09 May 2008 Posts: 42 Reviews: 19 Country: La La land... 300 Points
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Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 10:56 pm Post subject: |
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It is wonderful! I love it! I can atcually feel the intensity in her eyes and jaw, and that is a great thing, because it's not always easy to convey you feelings through a drawing!
My only concern is the notes that are coming out of her mouth, i suggest you cnage the color because right now it just looks like you made a mistake!
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summergrl13
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 12:28 pm Post subject: |
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| Love it, as usual! I can't do CRAP on the computer so I am utterly shocked at this amazing image before me! *Sinks down to knees and bows down to Fan for creating something that cool* So awesome! |
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TL G-Wooster
dear boy, do I LOOK like a military objective? Epic Novelist

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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 12:52 pm Post subject: |
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Cool! How did you draw it?
The hair is a bit too big, it covers her face so I can't see it properaly, tho that may be the point? The music notes coming out of her mouth are really distracting, I'd take them out completely. |
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Night Mistress
a lover of vampires Speaker of the Forum

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Posted: Mon Jun 09, 2008 4:22 pm Post subject: |
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| that's cool. i wished i could drawing that good. |
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