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The Elephant Boy {three}
The Elephant Boy {three}

by Kylan in Other Fiction
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PostPosted: Fri May 27, 2005 3:56 am    Post subject: shatterglass Reply with quote

Lewis Carroll here I come...



shatterglass



glass shatters as the butterfly steeped in chaos theories beats against my window

with a strumming sound the lyrics of his song scraped against anomalies in my mind 



I have no strength 

But the child within me reaches to stroke the offers of the wings

which can never be more than wished 

like an apteral bird I weep at the sight of the creatures of flight



the urchin within speaks in rapid succession

up is down

black is white

and shades of grey are all I see through 

the orbs of the infant betwixt my heart and soul



though the shatterglass is still in pieces when the flutterby 

full of a sonnet’s melodies 

strokes the edges of my abused window

the lyric song ties everything in place, happily as the bright winged creature

floats on

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 03, 2005 5:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Definitely Lewis Carrol. Except slightly more sane.

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