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The Critique... Click?
by Icaruss on Wed May 21, 2008 10:10 pm
OK. So, I'll review any of your thingies. Anything at all. A short story? A play? Poems? Lyrics? Yeah, sure. Just gimmie one per person, and I'll be, in the words of Lester Bangs, honest and unmerciful.
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by OverEasy on Wed May 21, 2008 10:11 pm
"I’m selfish, impatient, and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I’m out of control, and at times I’m hard to handle. But if you can’t handle me at my worst then you sure don’t deserve me at my best." -Marilyn Monroe
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by TL G-Wooster on Wed May 21, 2008 11:08 pm
Ghost of Christmas Present: And just for the record, there is nothing effeminate about me, okay? [Microwave pings] Ooh risotto, risotto!
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by Icaruss on Sat May 24, 2008 8:07 pm
Done and done.
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by Esmé on Sun May 25, 2008 6:37 pm
Hey, mind critiquing mine? It' called "Saving Michael", and can be found under Fantasy, though here's the link:
topic30600.html
topic30600.html
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by smorgishborg on Mon May 26, 2008 1:43 am
Hey, Icaruss, Invasion of the Penis Snatchers hasn't gotten much attention. It could use your acid wit.
The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
- Robert Frost
It cost $7 million to build the Titanic, and $200 million to make a film about it.
The plastic ties on the end of shoelaces are called aglets
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
- Robert Frost
It cost $7 million to build the Titanic, and $200 million to make a film about it.
The plastic ties on the end of shoelaces are called aglets
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by Icaruss on Tue Jun 10, 2008 11:12 pm
Dudes. Done and done. Gimmie some more.
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by Icaruss on Mon Jun 16, 2008 8:14 pm
Donísimmo.
Dude, I'm all, like, asking people for crits, and they're all, like, your story sucks! and you should totally, like, nix this thing, and I'm all, like, dude, I want to give something back to the community, and this thread is all, like, totally about that, you know?
So give some more stories to do, man.
Dude, I'm all, like, asking people for crits, and they're all, like, your story sucks! and you should totally, like, nix this thing, and I'm all, like, dude, I want to give something back to the community, and this thread is all, like, totally about that, you know?
So give some more stories to do, man.
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by spaced_out on Mon Jun 16, 2008 8:19 pm
hi, I'd like three chapters reviewed:
chapter 1: topic31592.html
2. topic31611.html
3. topic31673.html
it's HSM\AATC fanfiction, so watch out!
MATT
chapter 1: topic31592.html
2. topic31611.html
3. topic31673.html
it's HSM\AATC fanfiction, so watch out!
MATT
if you can dream YOU CAN DO IT!
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by spaced_out on Mon Jun 16, 2008 9:06 pm
and here is the 4th: topic31692.html
MATT
MATT
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by JFW1415 on Sat Jun 28, 2008 12:15 am
*Poke*
You're tough, but that's what I need. I may just avoid you when I read the critique, though.
Out of Focus
Thanks so much!
~JFW1415
EDIT: That's now edited a bunch, and I would love your feedback. Let me know when I can return the favor!
You're tough, but that's what I need. I may just avoid you when I read the critique, though.
Out of Focus
Thanks so much!
~JFW1415
EDIT: That's now edited a bunch, and I would love your feedback. Let me know when I can return the favor!
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by Icaruss on Sun Aug 10, 2008 7:14 pm
Haven't checked this in ages. I will be doing JFW1415's piece and any others that are posted after this (sorry spaced_out but I haven't the slightest idea what HSM is).
I've been gone for the last few weeks (read my blog), but that's not really why I haven't done many crits. I'm just a lazy bugger. Force me into shape. Please.
I've been gone for the last few weeks (read my blog), but that's not really why I haven't done many crits. I'm just a lazy bugger. Force me into shape. Please.
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by Jon on Sun Aug 10, 2008 7:42 pm
topic33990.html
This is a really short piece that people seem to love, it has gotten gold stars from everyone so It wont be too much work.
It is a poem, very short.
Thank You
---Jon---
This is a really short piece that people seem to love, it has gotten gold stars from everyone so It wont be too much work.
It is a poem, very short.
Thank You
---Jon---
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by BigBadBear on Sun Aug 10, 2008 10:59 pm
Hey. I love your critiques. They're so fantastic! You should apply to be an Instructor, dude.
Anyway. To add to your list to do:
I Love My Dirt; My Dirt Loves Me
Feel free to do what you like with it.
-Jared
Anyway. To add to your list to do:
I Love My Dirt; My Dirt Loves Me
Feel free to do what you like with it.
-Jared
it's not just notes; it's music.
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