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 Posted: Tue May 20, 2008 10:53 pm Post subject: Poor Imp's Poor House |
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University classes winding down and such. And I've dead-ditched any intent to take classes over the summer. ^^
...meaning I've a slight bit of time.
Anyhow, if you're poor in critiques--or poor in considered ones--ask here, da?
For precision's sake, and with Madmoiselle Suzanne's advice in mind:
The Imp Critiques...
Er, anything. Though I'm rather fond of Science Fiction and well-grounded fantasy.
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| Posted: Tue May 20, 2008 10:59 pm Post subject: |
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The Epic Quest to a Far Away Land in order to Defeat Evil And Save The World. Erm, well-grounded? Does that mean fantasy satire?
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| Posted: Tue May 20, 2008 11:28 pm Post subject: |
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| I've a rather large story in the Advanced Critique section called "The Edge of a Straight Razor". But if you don't want to read that (it's like 14,000 words long, man, who would?), you can always read one of my two Sci-Fi section stories: "Shift, Shape. Shift!" or "Time Travel is Complex Stuff." |
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| Posted: Tue May 20, 2008 11:54 pm Post subject: |
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Wooster (nee Twit)--
Ha, anything written by you has got to be decently grounded, in a backwards, feet planted in the sky sort of way. ^_~ I'll get to that soon as may be...and, er, as many chapters as possible.
Icaruss--
I read "Razor"--rather a long time ago. You sent it to me, yes? I'd like to send you my impressions of it...as I never get to doing that previously.
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| Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 12:24 am Post subject: |
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| Oh! Right! I did it for your contest, didn't I? I never really did thank you for that. It turned out pretty well, I guess, and if anything, it became a blueprint for everything else I've written in English, with the multiple narrators and the jumping up and down the timeline. |
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| Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 12:29 am Post subject: |
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| Icaruss wrote: |
| Oh! Right! I did it for your contest, didn't I? I never really did thank you for that. It turned out pretty well, I guess, and if anything, it became a blueprint for everything else I've written in English, with the multiple narrators and the jumping up and down the timeline. |
Yes. ^_^ ...The contest rather fell apart, as it lacked participants, if I recall
Though it was bloody dark, I enjoyed reading it quite a bit; and there was something extremely vivid, gritty and real about the characters--without simply being noir or hardnose movie cutouts.
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| Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 4:36 am Post subject: |
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| So... I'm sorry, are you going to review one of my other thingies? |
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| Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 4:41 am Post subject: |
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Oy, yes. ^_^ I've glanced at "SHAPE[...]" and ought to be able to get to that in something like good time.
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| Posted: Sat May 24, 2008 8:16 pm Post subject: |
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Finished. (Though I'd still like to get to "Shift, Shape[...]" as well as the continuing chapters of Twooster's tale.)
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| Posted: Sat May 24, 2008 9:39 pm Post subject: |
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Cool! I get demands on the afreet's time!  |
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| Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 4:19 am Post subject: |
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Oy, I'll get to that soon as I can, Sythe. ^_^
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| Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 9:05 pm Post subject: |
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Sythe, your Abductions is quite finished--er, critique-wise. ^_^
...'Tis back to reading Twooster's tale. ^_^ (And Jenna--finishing your currently off-kilter crit. -_-)
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| Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 3:51 pm Post subject: ? |
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will you review me????
please????
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