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LoveableLittleSock
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 Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 5:27 pm Post subject: Tweaking and Critiquing |
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Okay people, here's the deal. I love to review. I want to review. For free? Probably. Unless you feel generous enough to sign my guest book or give me points. You don't have to but, you know, it wouldn't hurt 
Here is what I review and here is what I don't:
I don't review lyrics. I don't review sci-fi or fantasy. Why? Because I might mis-interpret something and then get yelled at...
I review romance, which is one of my favorite things to critique, along with comedy. Historical fiction, sure, the more the merrier. Poems, the same. But I'm talking the risk with the interpreting thing. I might just do grammer, so don't get mad!
Let me tell you right now: If you say, "Be harsh," I will be (trust me). If you say, "Go easy on me," I'll try my best.
I would love some business. If you want some examples of my reviews, here are some I got the links for:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post366709.html?highlight=#366709
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post363304.html?highlight=#363304
Thanks!
Alright, here are the project's I'm working on right now.
JFW1415: Promises Not Kept -
Part 1: Finished
Part 2: Finished
Part 3: Finished
Fireweed:
Chrysalis - Finished
Sohini:
Things left Unsaid: Finished
RandomGrrl:
Intuition: In Progress
Icaruss: Tangled up in Blue -
Part 1: In progress
Part 2: In progress
Part 3: In progress
XxxDo:
The Ultimatum: In Progress
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Could everybody refrain from ordering reviews for a week or so? I have finals, along with a lot of critiques to do. =) |
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JFW1415
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| Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 7:21 pm Post subject: |
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*Poke*
Repercussions Part One
Repercussions Part Two
Repercussions Part Three
Please? 
Be harsh!
Thanks a billion! PM me if you'd like me to return the favor.
~JFW1415 |
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| Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 9:36 pm Post subject: |
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=D
I'd be happy with you critiquing any of my stories. No one ever seems to read my stuff. Be mean if you must. |
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JFW1415
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| Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 9:54 pm Post subject: |
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*Poke*
Haha, the one I listed was actually 'Promises Not Kept.' 'Repercussions' is the two-part one.  Jeez, I should have known that...
Anyways, thanks for the first review! I'm off to read it - I hope you were harsh!
~JFW1415 |
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| Posted: Wed May 28, 2008 5:31 pm Post subject: |
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If you would give me an in-depth critique of my poem "Chrysalis," which you can find in my featured works, you would have my undying love and gratitude. It's been posted for eons but I've only gotten one critique and would really appreciate more feed back.
Hm... I'm not going to say "be harsh" or "go easy on me", just... be honest?
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Hi! So, would somewhat-strange fiction count? Not like, "Aah! The tacos are attacking!" kind of strange. Just a freaky twist kind of story. If you're interested at all, click the link below.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic29344.html
PM me if I can help in return!
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| Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 12:04 am Post subject: |
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Please? It's a three-part story. It's called Tangled Up In Blue, and it's from the Romance Section. You can review the three parts, or just the first one, whatever you want.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic31224.html
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic31268.html
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic31373.html |
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| Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 11:22 am Post subject: heya |
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Hey there
I'll critique for a critique XD Haha
The story I want critiqued is called The Ultimatum, in Adventure/Action. Forgot how to link 
Anyway, is there anything you want critiqued?
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