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harrypotterbooklover101
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Posted: Tue May 13, 2008 2:40 pm Post subject:

Hmm.... This was funny and kinda gorss at the same time but,if I was a reading teacher I whould probley give that a b. To make this pome a little bit more exsided u should make it a ryming pome.
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thanatosdeath
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 2:25 am Post subject:

Great play of words, could be spaced though (just my opinion), I couldn't read very clearly...Overall it was good... Great desciption too! Death

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