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Suzanne
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Posted: Sat May 17, 2008 1:44 pm Post subject: |
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| Your deadline makes me nervous. I need to edit! Like a wild-thing. End of the year + Finals + Amazing contest = busy, busy busy! I am trying though. ^_^ |
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Caligula's Launderette
that's just what we call pillow talk, baby Master of the Forum

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Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 3:40 am Post subject: |
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I might extend the deadline if you goodly people decide you want it longer and gang up on me. For I am also deadened with finals.
*wink wink*
Ta,
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Poor Imp
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Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 3:42 am Post subject: |
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Oy, extend, yes? Otherwise, I'm going to have bloody slapdash pieces--or not close to five. -_-;
I've also got finals... And they're always ineptly timed.
IMP |
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JFW1415
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Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 2:47 pm Post subject: |
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Yes, please? I have three very rough drafts, and hopefully five by tonight, but I need time to edit.
Right now they're so rough they don't even have a plan. I just wrote, and it kept skipping all over the place - in POVs, tenses, characters, characters' history, everything!
Plus life is a bit insane right now.
So yes. Please extend? I'll give you cookies.
~JFW1415 |
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Icaruss
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Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 4:03 pm Post subject: |
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| Yeah, and extension would be nice. I'm in midterms over here. |
_________________ Now the cars are heavy and the planes they boom above,
I'm a traveller, a gambler, a drunkard and a dove.
I haven't thought about you for a long time, that's the truth,
I've had many lovers too, one of whom was named Ruth. |
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Caligula's Launderette
that's just what we call pillow talk, baby Master of the Forum

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Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 7:42 pm Post subject: |
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You've been granted an extension.
New Deadline Date: Sunday, June 15th, 11:59 PM
You can either post your pieces by that date or PM them to me.
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_________________ Telmarine: You're a mouse.
Reepicheep: You people have no imagination.
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Join us and our awesome ways at 18th Century Naval Fiction is my chick lit! You know you want to.
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Perra
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Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 8:08 pm Post subject: |
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^-^
Thanks, Cal. <3
I'm having trouble getting my pieces romantic. Probably because it's my least favourite genre. XD |
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Suzanne
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Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 8:11 pm Post subject: |
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| ohmigosh. I love you deeply. Deeper than previously. Which was deeper than the ocean. |
_________________ Adam: I mean, are you quite certain it's absolutely safe?
Agatha: Not absolutely safe, Adam. Not if they throw spanners. But I'll go quite slowly at first until I'm used to it. Just you see. Coming too?
Adam: I'll stay and wave the flag. |
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Perra
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Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 8:32 pm Post subject: |
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Deeper than the core of the Earth?  |
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Icaruss
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Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 10:55 pm Post subject: |
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Wrote another poem.
It's called "Don't Act All Hurt/Don't Be Silly". It's supposed to have two separate points of view, hence the "/" in the title. I didn't do it on purpose, I just wrote a verse that was some sort of chorus, and that really set apart the two blocks of text, and I thought: "Hurm. Can't I do this?" This will also be the last poem I write for the thingy, because I kinda feel like I'm cheating. |
_________________ Now the cars are heavy and the planes they boom above,
I'm a traveller, a gambler, a drunkard and a dove.
I haven't thought about you for a long time, that's the truth,
I've had many lovers too, one of whom was named Ruth. |
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Areida
Not-So-Official But Totally Essential Princess Ari Epic Novelist

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Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 3:55 am Post subject: |
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| Oooooooh my crackers and cheese, Cal, you are so my favorite. Ever ever ever. I way needed the extension too. Thank you! |
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Suzanne
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Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 3:26 am Post subject: |
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| Number Two finally posted! http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post371295.html#371295 |
_________________ Adam: I mean, are you quite certain it's absolutely safe?
Agatha: Not absolutely safe, Adam. Not if they throw spanners. But I'll go quite slowly at first until I'm used to it. Just you see. Coming too?
Adam: I'll stay and wave the flag. |
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Icaruss
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Posted: Fri May 23, 2008 1:16 am Post subject: |
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| 003. Anniversary: I didn't know whether to write this in second person because I already had a section in my fifth piece that is written in second person, but it just didn't work any other way. It's about an old man and his brain-dead wife. |
_________________ Now the cars are heavy and the planes they boom above,
I'm a traveller, a gambler, a drunkard and a dove.
I haven't thought about you for a long time, that's the truth,
I've had many lovers too, one of whom was named Ruth. |
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Icaruss
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Posted: Fri May 23, 2008 1:50 am Post subject: |
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Hey, so I... Kinda just realized that... The third thingy I posted doesn't really use any of the words. I phased out. So I doesn't really count.
Sorry!
EDIT: So, to replace the second poem, I'm entering an old piece called "Break-Up." It was recently digged up from the catacombs of the Romantic Fiction section. Don't ask me why. It uses 034. Independence. |
_________________ Now the cars are heavy and the planes they boom above,
I'm a traveller, a gambler, a drunkard and a dove.
I haven't thought about you for a long time, that's the truth,
I've had many lovers too, one of whom was named Ruth. |
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Caligula's Launderette
that's just what we call pillow talk, baby Master of the Forum

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Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 9:59 pm Post subject: |
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Whoo!
Hey guys! Just checking in on how your entries are coming. You've got about three weeks left.
Ta,
Cal. |
_________________ Telmarine: You're a mouse.
Reepicheep: You people have no imagination.
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Join us and our awesome ways at 18th Century Naval Fiction is my chick lit! You know you want to. |
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